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A poem I wrote that is going to be published

Poted by Atraya on 20 Feb 2008 13:21 - A poem I wrote that is going to be published
Here is the poem I sent in a contest and was accepted and will be published in the poetry book: Immortal Verses. Enjoy.




23- Pain Killer
The blood leaked out of his body
No one knew
But me.

His eyes torn out
No one wanted to know
But me.

No more skin on his body
No one wanted to see
But me.

His bones crushed to dust
His soul floated out
The desert sun burnt him.

I knew his blood
I knew his eyes
And saw his death.
Poted by Indiana on 20 Feb 2008 14:25 -
That's not bad ... nice job.

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